TMW presents: Collateral - Drive By (Shot diss)

TMW on top again..
Ayo..

[1] 0:43
Lemme welcome everybody to the Temple MW show,
Big up's go to my niggas in the hood and everyone i know.
Except for that nigga Shot, who should better lay low,
if not, then his death will be painful and slow,
This for all the niggas who with me in the first row,
And for all the hood cats who make other niggas bow,
Got no blades, but still my lyrics sharp enough to mow,
I'm telling you, hide nigga, this shit's about to BLOW
I'm like a buck because I'm coming for my doe,
Everybody knows you, especially that you suck yo,
Everybody knows you're a amateur and i'ma pro
My label can't grow, we can't be any bigger tho..
This a sick flow, bitch yo, you gotta go,
if no, this hoe, will end u six feet below,
Click-clack-pow, on that balla, click-clack-pow,
Blazin like the wind, leavin your niggas saying WOW
They call me Colla', 'Teral, or just simply Joe,
even the "Cold Pharaoh", and they call you Glen's hoe,

*shouting* OOOOOOOWWW

..uh...

[Beat continues]

[Bridge] 2:00
Immune to all those disses they sent on me
I'm not even trying yo, this' only fifty percent of me,
You rolling, but with neighborhood kids on yo' bike,
Or sit at home and play a little game of klondike,
Get out, Temple will roll and this is how it will sound like:
*Gunshot, scream sample from original beat*

[2] 2:16
You think you can destroy me? Only in your dreams,
It's looks really hard. well it's even harder than it seems,
You know who's rolling in, when you hear those screams,
It's TMW niggas, eliminating all those sucking rap teams.
We eat niggas, and you're not even a quarter of our meal,
That ain't even your stuff you rap, all you do is steal,
The End is beginning, time to pay your sins,
as the vinyl spins, like my 'vannahs OZ rims,
Studio battle or live, i do whatever you like,
Every song a bowling ball, this just another strike,
Everytime strike, nigga i don't do no spares
You mad as fuck, but i don't even care,
I can beat you anytime, just say when and where,
Perfect beat as i kick you in tact with the snare,
I never back down always ready for war,
You cry two tears for every single bar,
Hmm I look down the road, and already see a riva',
You standing still cuz you nothing but a dum' nigga,
Write my greatest shit when it's dawn, and the light gone,
Better run when you see my windows rolling down..

Yo it's drive by....
hahahahaha

it.... hurts....

its nice, you need to use multi's though really, try adding wordplay and punchlines, its kind of generic ))

10colej wrote:its nice, you need to use multi's though really, try adding wordplay and punchlines, its kind of generic ))

I would suggest you to read the song again... There are multis, and also wordplays and punchlines. If you can't find them then... lol

However thanks ))

RedWhite1017 wrote:

10colej wrote:its nice, you need to use multi's though really, try adding wordplay and punchlines, its kind of generic ))

I would suggest you to read the song again... There are multis, and also wordplays and punchlines. If you can't find them then... lol

However thanks ))

Ohhh, I see them now, you didn't put quotes around them so it was kind of hard to spot. That's usually what I do

And yeah, good job man just practice more though and you'll get better, I like this TMW shit, it's dope ))

Haha thanks but seriously practice? xD I'm doing this shit since 2011 xD ))

RedWhite1017 wrote:Haha thanks but seriously practice? xD I'm doing this shit since 2011 xD ))

not to brag or anything but i think i could beat u in a rap battle, but yh u have been doing it since 2011, a battle would be interesting, but we are allies ic so it wouldnt make sense xD))

Why not?
Battle =/= beef

But let's not chat here ))

RedWhite1017 wrote:Why not?
Battle =/= beef

But let's not chat here ))

Start the battle off. ))

I meant real battle.. Ingame.. With judges and shit. As a event.
And a real freestyle, out of the head shit.. Not like here where u can prepare and stuff lol ))

Lol, are you seriously asking to battle Oocly?))

Arabian Shot wrote:Lol, are you seriously asking to battle Oocly?))

Why not, if he thinks he can beat me ))