Cole - Str8 Slaughter (Shot Response)

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Cole - Str8 Slaughter (Shot Response)

Post by 10colej on Thu Sep 04, 2014 9:38 pm



[Verse 1]:
How the fuck you gonna say niggas don't know me?//
I got homies nigga, your "homies" are just a bunch of cronies//
I hold the forty on the block, you messin'? Get hit with the "Wesson"//
I work with steel like a "smith", you just like to squeal like a snitch// (did u get the punchline? .40 is smith and wesson)
Compare my victims to yours? It'll make you feel like a bitch//
Compare the snitchin' to yours? Then it's a different case//
It'll leave you with a different face, laying dead in a different place//
If we scrap? Just like your "flag", the battlefield will be "green and red"// (cuz ur arab & green = grove, red = blood)
If you diss me brother? The battlefield will be painted with christmas colors//
You an ugly nigga, you're only pulling hoes because you get paid, son//
The only reason you're still alive is 'cuz you ain't never get layed (laid) son// (getting laid, pulling hoes, get it?)
I fuck all your main hoes, while you lay low, you're gettin' played son!//
And you're the broke nigga, before, you couldn't even get your braids done!//
Ice poles? You a cold stripper, better off working at the Pig Pen, broke nigga//
NO respect on the streets, the real G's know you ain't pulled no triggas'!//
I'm a hard hit, nigga, you don't wanna be the one to start shit//
Because when I start to spit is when your heart starts to quit!//
Discard your shit, them rhymes was straight wack bars//
This nigga needs to back off, before I blow his sack off//
You working "soft", but yet this nigga is still "jerking off"// (get it? flaccid, not hard, double entreade, etc.)

((Please give good feedback, i've been training on rap royalty with the best of them and my rap skills have IMPROVED, I don't want no comments about the instrumental being in 2001, I don't care, just give me good feedback and a good review. Thank you!))




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Re: Cole - Str8 Slaughter (Shot Response)

Post by Big B on Fri Sep 05, 2014 8:52 pm

10colej wrote:I work with steel like a "smith"
this sounds great along the wesson line
10colej wrote:Just like your "flag", the battlefield will be "green and red"// (cuz ur arab & green = grove, red = blood)
sounds weird, but not in a totally bad way, i think you could have hidden some word play there though.

good job nontheless))

p.s - double entendre
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Re: Cole - Str8 Slaughter (Shot Response)

Post by 10colej on Fri Sep 05, 2014 9:38 pm

Big B wrote:
10colej wrote:I work with steel like a "smith"
this sounds great along the wesson line
10colej wrote:Just like your "flag", the battlefield will be "green and red"// (cuz ur arab & green = grove, red = blood)
sounds weird, but not in a totally bad way, i think you could have hidden some word play there though.

good job nontheless))

p.s - double entendre
thanks for the feedback, agreed i could've spit better tbh, wasn't in the mood but i managed to throw a couple punches in there, again though thanks for the feedback it helps dude lol))
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Re: Cole - Str8 Slaughter (Shot Response)

Post by Big_Mero on Sun Sep 07, 2014 4:51 pm

In this one you improved perfectly, gj and keep it up gee))
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